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Thursday 11 April 2013

Left behind on the beach


LEFT BEhIND AT THE BEACH

Left behind on the beach:
Two small sandcastles that were stepped on
And sandcastles being washed away slowly
buckets waiting to be used.

Left behind on the beach:
A family playing rugby and stepping to get their goal.
And loud,barking dogs on their leashes
barking loudly at people.

Left behind on the beach:
Pieces of slimy, green seaweed
washing up on shore
And pieces of rubbish
floating out sea.

Left behind on the beach:
Two massive waves
crashing together and
flying fish jumping
out of the water.

1 comment:

  1. Hey,

    WOW! Looks like you've done a lot of work Kata and I also like how you highlighted to correct words in the poem.

    Keep it. :)

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